Improve Your Writing:
Six Ways to Get Useful Feedback

By Roy Stevenson

Trying to improve your writing as a freelancer can be difficult in such a solitary occupation.  Like many of the creative arts, one of the biggest challenges you face is getting useful feedback. 

Unless you're in a writer’s group that meets regularly to critique each others work, you simply type and pray.  When editors buy your work that’s one positive sign that your words are up to snuff.

But can you ever be satisfied with the status quo?  Do you sometimes wonder how you can improve your writing? 

No one starts out with fine prose. When I look back at articles from my first couple of years, I cringe at the clumsiness of some of my writing.  But we all have to start somewhere, and we don’t start at the finish line.

six ways to improve your writing and get useful feedback

So, how can you improve your writing?

Here are six techniques that I’ve used to improve my stories.  I think you’ll find these techniques easy to implement and very useful for improving your writing over time.

1.  Take a Break, then Re-Read Your Work

When writing an article you want to be very focused.  But you can only be in the “writing zone” for so long before your mind wanders and you become unproductive. That’s when it’s time to take a break.  Have a drink of water, take a walk, do a few stretches.  Then, revisit your story with a fresh mind.

When you sit down again, begin by reading your article from the start.  You'll find yourself tidying it up as you re-read it – correcting grammar errors, improving sentences, and so on.

If the words just aren’t flowing, re-read the article from the start again.  Look at it from a flow perspective.  Pretend you are reading the article for the first time.  Does the order make sense?  Does it catch your interest?  Do the thoughts in one paragraph flow into the next one?  What’s missing?  What can you do to improve your writing?

And after you finish your first draft, take a break for a day or two before you do the final edits.  You'll come back to your work with a clear head and fresh mind, ready to make whatever improvements are needed.

2.  Use Technology to Improve Your Writing

Most software includes tools to improve your writing on the spot.  Besides helping with grammar and spelling while writing the article, some word processing software will offer quite a bit more information if you set up your preferences correctly.

After I’ve completed and rewritten the article to my satisfaction, I’ll run the “Spelling and Grammar” check in MS-Word.  It’s a good check for a few things you might have missed.

There's one important thing to remember about Spellcheck: it will correct your spelling, but that doesn't mean the word is used in the correct context.  Spellcheck doesn’t know the difference between a deer and a dear, for example.  So you and your volunteer editor will need to keep an eye out for these things.

If you set up the options in MS-Word , once it does a spelling and grammar check a more detailed summary will pop up.  This includes detailed information about the number of words in the document, words per paragraph, sentences per paragraph, readability and a few other statistics.

I wrote a separate article about using readability statistics and how it can further improve your writing.

One other way to improve your writing is to invest in a few books to help you with style, structure and general writing advice.  Here are my favorite books to help you.

3.  Have Someone Edit Your Draft

My wife, who also edits this website, has been editing my articles for years.  She reads through a print copy of my article and makes notations in red.  I have rarely disagreed with her feedback.

Notice that I say she reads a print copy of my stories.  There’s something about reading from the printed page that enables us to find typos, grammar errors, and readability issues much easier than on a computer.  It's because we "scan" on computers and "read" the printed page.  Errors jump out at us far better from the printed page than from the computer screen.

After my wife/editor has read my story, she reviews the document with me. She looks for all the usual things:  poor grammar, typos, misspellings, repeated words, repetitive ideas.

More importantly, she reads my work for “flow” and “readability”.  A story with good readability, or flow, leads you gently by the hand from paragraph to paragraph.  A flowing story has no abrupt topic changes and leads you logically to the next point with some kind of transition.

Find someone you know and trust to read your work before you submit it to the editor.  Another writer would be a good choice.  Be sure to explain to your volunteer editor what you’re hoping to achieve – and that you need their best feedback to improve your writing. 

My wife can sometimes be brutal with her recommended changes – but it always helps me improve my writing.  And the magazine editor has a lot less work to do in the end.  That makes for a happy editor.

4.  Have Your Article Fact Checked

It’s good practice to send your final draft on to the tourist agency representative/media director for fact checking before you submit the story to the editor.  The media rep may not be critiquing your style, but I have found them sometimes correcting typos and misspellings.

If the story has been fact checked, you gain brownie points with the editor when you submit the story.  It's less work for the editor.

I always mention that my stories have been fact-checked by the media director.  Editors always appreciate when you take care of this step for them.

5.  Compare Published Article vs Original

When you receive a magazine with your article in it, bring up the original manuscript on your computer and compare it, sentence by sentence, with the published article.

Note how the editor changed the title.  Pay attention to sub-titles and headings that changed or were added.  Look at how the editor  changed your sentences, re-arranged paragraphs, deleted words, added words and otherwise improved your writing. 

These changes make the story more “readable”.  This is great feedback  from a professional editor – and it’s free!

Some writers are offended when an editor changes their words.  But editors know their audience best of all.  So take note of their changes and use that knowledge to give them a better article the next time around.

6Re-write When You Resell

Reselling your articles helps you make more money from each word you write.  I resell a high percentage of my articles and recommend that you try doing this, too.   When I resell them I always rewrite them. 

When you're rewriting an old article you're revisiting it with a fresh mind.  You’ll find all sorts of ways to improve and smooth out the piece. 

You'll also get the chance to correct any mistakes and incorporate new things you've learned.  We all make recurring mistakes – and you’ll be able to eliminate them from the new version of the story.

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Roy Stevenson sitting in front of his computer.

Roy Stevenson is a professional travel writer and the author of  Over the past ten years, he’s had more than 1000 articles published in 200 magazines, trade and specialty journals, in-flights, on-boards, blogs and websites and has traveled on assignment around the U.S. and to dozens of international destinations.