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Issue #367: Does the Perfect Travel Experience Exist?
September 13, 2021
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Editorial: Does the Perfect Travel Experience Exist?On my 100+ press trips and Fam tours I’ve seen far too many travel writers pass damning judgment on destinations because of minor irritants. Things that should have been shrugged off as part of the rough-and-tumble of travel became the focal point of snarky articles. One tiny incident, sub-standard meal or below average attraction apparently ruined the whole destination in the eyes of these writers.
I appeal to my fellow travel writers to use discretion and common sense when writing their travel stories.
Everyone certainly has some travel horror stories. And because travel writers travel so much, we’ve seen more than our share of the awful, the average, and the downright ugly at our destinations.
But, were things really all that bad?
Bad, to me, is being caught in the middle of a volatile revolution, stranded by a pandemic, mugged, flooded out by a tsunami, fending off spitting cobras in your hotel room, or having your wallet stolen from your pocket and thrown over a cliff by malicious monkeys. (I actually saw this happen in Bali. Fortunately, I wasn’t the victim.)
I’m suggesting that most inconveniences are part of the travel experience — and there’s little we can do about these things that will change them.
Have you ever had a mediocre hotel experience? I’m sure we've all slept in a few hotels that were less than perfect.
If you’re a travel writer who spitefully thinks, “Everyone should know that this hotel is bad. I’m going to write a review and make sure everyone knows about it.” So, they write to their review and their comments are published verbatim. The devastating results: hundreds or perhaps thousands of other people avoid this hotel, just because of your singular bad experience.
Never mind that perhaps the hotel was short staffed that day and service suffered as a result.
What about theme parks? Some are definitely better than others. And some cost way more than they should, but isn’t there some fun to be found?
When we moved to Danang, Vietnam we heard about Ba Na Hills, a French Village Theme Park about 45 minutes away in the mountains. The advertisements made it look tacky to us, so we didn’t visit it for our first two years. It took a couple of younger friends to open our minds. They told us it was worth a visit, so we gave it a try.
It turns out we loved it and we’ve returned several times with visitors and friends. It wasn't fair to pass judgment before we experienced it. And even if we had hated it, there were thousands of people there thoroughly enjoying themselves. A negative opinion doesn't matter among all the joy that we observed.
Or maybe you thought a museum was boring. Did it really have nothing of value to offer?
Maybe the subject matter wasn’t your thing. But you can learn something in every museum. And don’t forget, other people may have really liked that museum you found lame and boring.
As a travel writer you need to identify the audience that can benefit from the experience — and write from that perspective.
Most bad experiences are subjective. Travel writers can’t presume to speak for all travelers. You need to write from a broader perspective, one that takes into consideration the target audience who would enjoy the place.
A few years ago I visited the Singapore Reptile Park with some friends. The reptile park is directly opposite the world-famous Jurong Bird Park. To be honest, the Reptile Park is run down. I wondered how it managed to stay in business.
But, at the reptile park my friend’s 10-year-old son got to hold a small boa constrictor and a small crocodile. At this decrepit park we stroked the backs of the iguanas as they were being fed.
We also watched some 8-foot long South American fish violently thrash around in the water while they were being fed. We saw crocodiles hanging out and snapping at the keepers who were sweeping out their domain. We saw cute little turtles in a pond, and snakes curled up in cages.
Our young friend talked about these things constantly and enthusiastically for the rest of the day. He wasn’t so impressed with the bird park next door.
How would I write about the reptile park? I might tell people they only need to spend an hour there. I might say the Reptile Park has only a few major attractions. And I'd definitely mention that it’s an attraction good for 10-year-old kids who like to experience exotic animals, up close and personal. I’d put them in the shoes of our young friend and describe his excitement.
Another example is Winston Churchill Underground War Experience Museum. It’s overshadowed by the slick and glitzy London Dungeon next door.
The Underground War Experience is expensive for what it delivers, and its displays and exhibits could be jazzed up somewhat. But would I tell people to avoid it? Certainly not.
In The Underground Experience I learned new things about the blitz, (the bombing of London by the German Luftwaffe.) I learned what life was like in London during this traumatic part of its history. I remember, vividly, sitting in a bomb shelter replica listening to the sound of a British Spitfire fighter plane, the drone of a V1 flying bomb, and feeling the reverberations as bombs landed around me.
Newspaper headlines posted on the walls told of major events in WWII and the blitz. These experiences gave me a better idea of the hard and frightening times that Londoners endured.
I wouldn’t hesitate to tell people to go and see it for themselves, especially history buffs and anyone who wants to learn about this part of history — because I certainly did.
The concept that every destination or attraction should be perfect is ruining the traveler’s experience.
Not every travel experience is equal in quality, content or excitement. I wish we’d ditch this judging mentality of painting an attraction as good or bad, and therefore “worth visiting” or “not worth visiting”. Has anyone ever really had THE perfect travel experience?
We owe it to our readers to objectively describe an attraction and even point out the shortcomings of a place. But, our travel writing should inform and educate people about the attractions or destination so they can visit and make up their own minds.
Here are seven of the best practical travel writing tips and techniques to improve your writing and take it to the next level.
This Week's Featured Post
Dreaming Up Luxury Travel Story IdeasI accidentally stumbled into luxury travel writing. By good fortune, I landed some cushy assignments that included visiting high-end resorts, villas, and lodges. After those initial experiences, I’ve never looked back!
Here’s how I dream up luxury travel story ideas that will sell. If you do these things, you can get cushy luxury travel assignments.
I’ve used these techniques for some superb luxury assignments: in 2013 we did a 28-day stay at 12 high-end Balinese luxury villas, and then we repeated this again in 2018 with a 30-day stay at 11 high-end luxury Balinese villas and resorts. You know – the ones with helicopter pads near the front entrance.
We’ve also had stays at numerous rustic Pacific Northwest lodges and plenty of Arizona spas and resorts. Another of our luxury travel gigs was a week-long cruise down the Burgundy Canal on a 146-foot long boutique hotel barge, sampling France’s finest food and wines.
Does this sound like what you’d like to do? Do you want to break into the luxury travel writing market?
Upcoming PostsSeptember 20: Four Great Reasons to Sell Multiple Travel Story Ideas and How To Do It
September 27: Six Tips for Dreaming Up Travel Story Ideas that Sell
October 4: One of My Most Potent Travel Writing Secrets: Researching My Destinations Before I Pitch
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Jessica Pickett's Impressive Travel Writing TrajectoryHere’s Jessica Pickett’s impressive and inspiring story, in her own words, of how she launched her impressive travel writing career.
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“While attending a Travel Writer’s Conference in San Diego in 2014, Roy and his wife, Linda, sat at my table and, to my good fortune, easily struck up conversation. After chatting with Roy, I immediately purchased his eBooks, even before hearing him speak on stage.
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Here’s how Jessica went from strength to strength to become a professional travel writer . . .
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Well-written query letters convince magazine editors that you have exciting travel stories their readers will absolutely love.
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